4.06.2009

Advice on Ads?

I'm pretty happy with my ads... but I'm a little concerned with the type on my full page ad. Any suggestions on how I can make the copy better? (the composition, but also the actual content of the text)
And here is the 5.5x5.5 ad.


3 comments:

Tres Swygert said...

The line that starts "Rockstar Gold is guaranteed..", its' gaps are rather wide. If you are able to close them a bit, that will definitely help. :)

stan anderson said...

The only thing I might suggest is that you could put the red marker or pen in the Ad as well just to give it a "real" feel to it. Not sure where you would put it, but it might give it more of a 3D feel perhaps.

MATE said...

thats a so funny and easy going one.

you have so many great Designs on ur Blog.
every one with this nice Old classic 50ths Cowboy look. Is my impression maybe I am wrong.

but again nice Works :)


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